낙태합법화에 대해 나는 찬성하는 입장이고, C는 나에 반하는 입장을 내가 그건 틀렸다고 지적하고 마무리 단계로 넘어가는 부분이야 이전까지는 원어민이 전에 봐줬는데 여기부턴 내가 순수 창작이라.. 전문은 아니고 그냥 아웃라인이야... baby's human rights of life <- 이거 너무 어색한거 같아 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 내 의도는 아기의 인권이 침해될 수 있다는 반대 입장이 있다는 걸 보여주려는건데 전에 원어민이 rights? not life? 막 이러더라고.. 낙태합법화되면 인권침해될 수 잇단걸 표현한건데.. 하여간 베이비의 목숨이 날아가는거니 짜꾸 life막 이래서 저렇게 말도 안되게 해버렸어 이중 소유격으로 표현해본건데 영 어색해.. 한 새벽 1시까지 볼꺼니까 제발 수정해줘 ㅠㅠ (안되있음 낼 아침 7시까지라도 봐야지 제발 부탁해 ㅠㅠ) 아 글구 트렌지션부터 끝까지는 그냥 한 번 쭉 읽고 문법상 틀린거 혹시 있음 지적해줘.. 워드로 쳐서 나름 수정잘 했다 생각하는데 ㅠ_ㅠ 부탁해.. C: Counterpoint – Baby’s human rights of life 1. Their opinion – If abortion legislated, it could infringe on baby’s human rights of life. 2. Error of their thinking – The exact meaning of human rights in reality is different, and they should consider mother own life. 3. Exact meaning of human rights – Human rights could be guaranteed when one’s environment is set. Transition         We discussed the counterpoint that against abortion for baby’s rights of his life, and error of their thinking. Moreover, I have explained what is really good way for baby’s life. Next, Sang-Hyub would summarize about our presentation. Summary         Above all, we talked that abortion legalization could bring retrenching social cost, promoting social welfare, and improvement of civil capacity to improve society part. In addition, we also discussed it could help to family planning in both economical side and mental side. Lastly we checked the counterpoint that against abortion, and we found out their claim have error. Memorable Concluding Remarks         Anyway, baby’s human rights are very important thing. However, mother bear baby without a sense of responsibility, so baby could not grow up in easy life, then, it would be not only meaningless life in individual part but burden in social part. Different from past, nowadays we can control bearing by medical improvement without risk, so we should abortion legislated, and use this blessing of medical operation for our happy life. Keep in mind what is logical and practical way to guarantee happy life.