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제목: Quistions about transfer requirements...

Dear Admission 관리자?

 Hello. I am an international student attending one of the US public Universities and a potential transfer student for junior status of your school. After sophomore year, September 2006, I went back to my home country and have been working for 2 years to earn another 2 years tuition fee. Now, I’m ready for going back to school next year, and I am sending this mail to you, because I have some questions about transferring to your college.

1.      Does ACT or TOEFL take a big consideration in the transfer admission process?

2.     Since my last test date of ACT and TOEFL was December 2003 which is 5years ago and the test results have been expired already, do I still have to re-take these tests to transfer you college?

3.     Since I have two ‘A’ graded college writing courses at my former college, can they replace TOEFL requirement for international transfer students?

4.     I have been away from my former college for 2years. Professors probably do not remember me and I cannot contact my TAs. I would like to know if teacher’s evaluation forms can be written by manager or supervisor at my work place instead.

In spite of above difficulties, if I have a chance, I really want to apply to XXX College for next year. Thank you for spend your time and I will wait for your reply.

 Sincerely XXX